Monday, May 01, 2017 5:00 AM Write a short story (at least 5 paragraphs) about what happened after Ralph looked up and saw the naval officer. What happened? Did they go back home? Are their parents alive? Is Jack punished? Use your imagination, but remember to write it as a short story NOT as an essay. I came upon the beach I fell of exhaustion, luckily a naval officer rescued me from a near death experience. Whew, it is good to be alive. We were on the ship going home. The Captain fed us some chicken and broccoli. It was so good. When I had gotten to the US my mom heard we were rescued. She had come and hugged me. She told me she was at grandma's house. When I got home We had a big feat and gues what. My dad came home. I had told my father about my experiences on the island. How I was chief, and was making sure we were able to survive. I told him about Jack, the boy who wa...
I like the way the you explained how the conch shell was used. I did understand how you used symbolism in this as showing civilized people and how they used it to call assembles. The picture did help your blog it showed what one looks like. Overall good job.
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ReplyDeleteToday we crashed on an island near the pacific. As I began to wander off around the island, I came to the beach where I met a boy named piggy on the beach. He is as fat a pig . We hung out for a little and went in the water for a swim. After we ran into some more boys just about our age with younger kids. This is where we decided to establish a leader between us boys so that we could survive long enough to get off of this island. I took the role of the leader and made Jack whom lost to me the commander of the hunters. I low key do not trust this boy and he may be a hazard to us all so I will do everything in my power to keep him in check.
Outstanding job explaining the use of the conch shell. The picture you used gave me a clear vison of what the conch shell might look like. Your essay was also very well written.
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