Chapter 5
Dear Diary,
Today I decided to call a meeting. It was
time to straighten out the others for not upholding the groups rules. When they
came I started yelling at them. They weren't of any assistance in building
shelters, they do not gather drinking water, they neglect the signal fire, and
they do not even use the designated toilet area. The hunters on the other hand
must remember to keep that fire going, I don’t want to ever see another chance
like this go to waste.

Subsequently, the littluns are plagued by
nightmare visions. I told them there are no monsters on the island. One of the
littluns speaks up and claims that he has actually seen a beast. I asked him
where it would hide during the day. He responded," it might come up from
the ocean at night."
This makes me feel that that the boy is
telling the truth however, I don’t know if it's true. I mean it terrifies all
the boys. Jack stepped in and said he and his hunters will hunt it down and
kill it. But is it possible?
~ Ralph

Much improved. Keep it up!
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